You'd love my thoughts when I have my coffee, you know..
The last line does it for me. Very touching.
Such a lovely, wistful tone. Very nice job, Jasbir!
I really like the play of 'inner peace' and 'better place' : )
awww I totally wasn't expecting that last line. So sweet and heartfelt.
The last line is the thing that is helping us cope.
Lovely they got to travel and make some memories before the end came.
Am very grateful for that now though it was a painful and tough journey for them.
This is so sad.
I liked the ending and the perspective in this piece. Beautiful...