Tuesday, 11 November 2014

Inner peace

A year long travel.
My weekends dedicated to you
but you still left me.
I should have been in shambles.
 Instead I feel inner peace,
because you're in a better place.
 
 
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 November 2014 at 23:23

    The last line does it for me. Very touching.

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  2. Anonymous13 November 2014 at 08:40

    Such a lovely, wistful tone. Very nice job, Jasbir!

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  3. kymm13 November 2014 at 17:38

    I really like the play of 'inner peace' and 'better place' : )

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  4. Jen Brunett13 November 2014 at 23:02

    awww I totally wasn't expecting that last line. So sweet and heartfelt.

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  5. Unknown14 November 2014 at 00:32

    Lovely they got to travel and make some memories before the end came.

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    1. Jasbir Kaur Dalip (Beeray)15 November 2014 at 00:10

      Am very grateful for that now though it was a painful and tough journey for them.

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  6. Anonymous14 November 2014 at 05:42

    This is so sad.

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  7. Unknown14 November 2014 at 08:02

    I liked the ending and the perspective in this piece. Beautiful...

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