Tuesday, 11 November 2014

Inner peace

A year long travel.
My weekends dedicated to you
but you still left me.
I should have been in shambles.
 Instead I feel inner peace,
because you're in a better place.
 
 

12 comments:

  1. The last line does it for me. Very touching.

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  2. Such a lovely, wistful tone. Very nice job, Jasbir!

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  3. I really like the play of 'inner peace' and 'better place' : )

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  4. awww I totally wasn't expecting that last line. So sweet and heartfelt.

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    1. The last line is the thing that is helping us cope.

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  5. Lovely they got to travel and make some memories before the end came.

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    1. Am very grateful for that now though it was a painful and tough journey for them.

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  6. I liked the ending and the perspective in this piece. Beautiful...

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